Pretty cool

This song is pretty cool. I don't know the original song though.
What i don't really like is that the crash is hit so many times. I can't really think of any other things that could be better.
Nice job on this one!
8/10
5/5
MH16

Oh Cool...

When it first started, I really thought this song was gonna suck. But you proved me wrong.

When everything kicks in, it has a really upbeat feel to it. I do like the different synths you created and used. But I think there could be more. There seems to be something lacking. Everything in this song is very short term. You have no long and held out chords or anything.

This really leads your sound to be a little transparent. I suggest adding a pad, or even some strings in the background. Just have them follow the tonic for all the chords. Because this has a lot of cool sounds and lines going on, but it needs some musical glue to hold them all together.

The drums are decent, but I'm not sold on the yet. Other than that one symbol crash, I'm not able to hear them very well. Maybe do some mixing work on bringing out the kick and snare a bit. That would really help the flow and structure of this song.

One thing that needs work is the ending. It just didn't quite do it for me. Tweak the ending, and that should really help the song a lot.

But as a start, it is pretty good.

4/5 and 7/10 overall. Nifty little tune you got here.