Hm...

You have a decent thing going here. I mean, you have a lot of transitions that just seem to cut over into a diff thing. You need to work more on multiple things/melodys and synths playing at one time with some killer filler noises and beats.

One of your basslines is really sweet. I wouldn't mind getting my hand on the .flp file for this to try to make something a lil more orderly out of it and help ya with transitions... I love transitions.

Keep trying man.

-Fuel to fking Fire-

the song was good, but..

yea...this isnt a review, but i just wanna tell ya that in FL you go to options , and goto audio settings, and turn up the buffer length (the slidable bar in the middle of audio options). that will allow you to use more patterns with a better sound.

It's got potential

...but it just doesn't quite make it. Not enough to it. You could most definitely pull that together into something pretty interesting though.

solid 3.