'Ey.

Not too bad. I really liked it, actually. I recognized a lot of the synths, but that's alright. I give it a nine just because the actual melodies are excellent. However, the way they were put together feels a bit lacking. I'm not sure what I think of the piano sound. At the same time I like the treble-heavy approach, but I feel it needs more punch. The percussion is pretty iffy. It's a bit boring in general. The bass was alright, nothing special. Looks like you've got a lot of talent, you just need to learn to be willing to throw more into a song.

Anyhow, comments aside, I wouldn't mind remixing this song if you'd be willing to share the FLP. Just throw me a message and we can figure it out if you're up to it. Good job, though. Keep it up. :D

You want a full sound? It's all about landscaping.

While I think that this song is pretty much solid, although I'm not a fan of the beginning, a good technique to fullness is using, well, full sounds. For example, instead of using such a soft synth in the background, combined with the piano, use a detuned saw synth, although honestly, I wouldn't change much on this song if I were composing it myself.

This song has a nice ambience on it, I like it.

Another technique is a stronger-sounding bass and a more powerful kick, as well as a more-creative drumbeat. Maybe do more with the high-hats.

But this is a nice song, it really is. Good job!

Very good

i enjoyed it very much. keep up the good work!

memories

it's spelled memories, but anyways, i like it, very serene

5/5 :)