Could become something, but needs much work

When starting a song with drums, they really need to evolve, and that is fast, since drums are usually very repetative and it doesn't take long to get bored of just drums. i would suggest some fills here or there, and not just at the place where other different isntruments come in, because as they are now, they sound really stale. Ways you could start with, if you really want the drums to play that much in the beginning, is to create an automation clip controlling the frequency of the drums and changeing them slightly, and also throughout the whole song, And please do alter them more, as in alter the beat, and even pushing more drums into there over time.. like first having only bassdrum and hihat, then progressively adding crash drums, tom toms and whatever.

As for the bass melody, it's good and fills it's purpose, but you need something in the higher frequensies to act like a melody, and you really need to enhance the bass sounds for this song, because the bassdrum really dominates it as it's coming out now. Hope this helps