Very good!

That was amazing! Especially for your first submission! But it does kind of go off a bit. I liked the instruments a lot. They really made the song unique and great. the beat is awesome. I hope you make more like this!

hmm

this was a really good song really good.. there was a about 45 secs into the song things got a little off beat but still i liked it but maybe a little bit more on beat the next time ^^