well

similar to what the guys below are saying, except 4 minutes is definately not too long for this song, any version of the original is about this length, but it is a bit long for this particular arrangement, too many sections are repeated. What you've got here is mainly really good except for a few sections of clashes (0:47 through to 1:00 has quite a few, 2:06 and 2:18, about 2:25 theres another clashing section... You get the idea anyway...
Some nice string sounds going, especially for fruity loops.
Theres some good work here, just keep trying and do something that hasn't been doen before.
Good luck with more work :)

thats well and good.

This is one of those songs that most people know how to play on the piano when they learn. Some of your note are slightly off wich makes it hard to listen to. ITs easy to just get this from a midi online and say you recreated it so i can't really say much for this track. IF anything nice attempt. I hear some panning as the song goes on wich i suppose is ok. still, your gonna wanna turn down some of your instruments and 4 minutes of this song is wayyy to long LOL. I'll be looking forward to something more original coming out by you.

Don't give up writing music just gotta be more artistic.

Wyldfyre1

Over covered

Good work but I can't remember how many times i've heard a cover of the Pachelbel Canon. In fact I think I've made one.