bad quality

sounds i nthe wrong key as well, could be due to distortion of sound due to quality though....
the solo had no real feel of structure, just like a few randomly bunched phrases, no sense of an ending. Some slight off timing. Its not really really bad, it just needs soem touching up, quality recording and a bit more thought into structure, should come with time :) good luck in the future, would be nice to hear some decent quality recordings one day, then it'll much easier to make a judgement on the actual music.