Pretty good

It just needs more depth by adding more pads. Especially in the beginning.

The transition at 0:48 needs to be better. That sound comes fits well, just doesn't transition well.

The cut off at 1:09 probably wasn't needed that soon. I do like the soft part, just shouldn't cut off that soon.

The piano that comes into the soft part doesn't fit perfectly, but is good after the transition.

The ending was sudden and too soon. You should go back into a part like from 0:48 but still making it fit better.

Good start. I like most the sounds. All you need is more layer at the beginning, fix some transitions, and change the ending. Nice work.

{DjZ}