Getting better!
I think the last part was really random and laughable, but it's ok I guess. You're still getting better, and that's good. 5/10 ;3 Not so bad, but not fully good either. Keep it going!
Second melody. It went a lot of work into this one since I'm new to making music, and I had some small problems on my way. I know one part of the song is a bit low, I might fix that later.
EDIT: Changed some few things that were bugging me. Hopefully it sounds better now. D:
Getting better!
I think the last part was really random and laughable, but it's ok I guess. You're still getting better, and that's good. 5/10 ;3 Not so bad, but not fully good either. Keep it going!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.