Oh man...
the tidal surge parts pierce my ears, and the ice cap zone parts sound like you're playing them on a rubber band attached to a box, with some wine glass action thrown in. It's repetitive and annoying. I think there's potential, but it's buried so far underneath the horrific, abysmal smash up of annoying noises that you've made that i don't even know where to start pointing you in the right direction. I'm sorry, but this song is just that bad to me. I wish you luck on future attempts.
NICKtendo 
