so smoth

wow i barly noticed the other instruments enter. amazingly put together

Schwayt Baybee Jebus

Kind of cool. You still made it soft and slow enough to make it classical, but you kept the techno-ish feel to it from the "wah" instrument, or the pitch-bender you used on it, and the distorted notes in the background. I'd suggest you might want to switch those out for a gentle pad or something. If it's a lullaby, I don't think you want people to think that it's like some kind of slow rock song or something.

1st Review!

yayness. well done here. truly mesmorising piece. vey enchanting. has a midnight moon feel to it. I can propably say the only problem really is the Pitch bending instrument. where it is a FAB idea. it needs a little equalising because it overpowers a tad.
i think although it has a basic chord pattern it is executedin a pretty nice way. its a very "pretty" song LOL. i think you need a little more "bottom end" stuff. maybe some lower strings... bass? even a light snare brushing to help establish a smoother rhythm.... if you want i mean. it doesnt NEED percussion at all. 9/10 5/5
P.s. if you want i can download it, make some keyboarded additions and send it to you so you can hear what i personally would have added?
or not. LOL.
take care and keep it up!