Nice job there mate!
---00:00 - 00:53: this whole area of the intro felt really empty, with not enough bass.
00:01 - 00:15: I didnt like the lowpass filter right here, felt abit empty you know?
00:16 - 00:30: The sudden bass on the kick was quite pleasing to the ears, but it cost abit of emptyness in 00:01 - 00:15.
00:31 - 00:53: The bass coming in here fitted well, but it still needed something!
other than that, the acid make it pretty good :)
00:55 - 01:17ish No offense, but i think you got sloppy here, it was way to sudden, take of the kick in that area and fade it in slowly with a snareroll.
Well, everything else was pretty good, loved the melody, lead, piano tune, i was sitting in a pool of pure musical joy!
great job, intro is the only thing you need to work on.