I'll leave you with my second song here.
This ones a fairly old one.
Well enjoy
Hmmm!
The vocals really really should have been boosted a bit above the instruments. Easier to hear, more enjoyment. :) Added this to my favorites.
But as far as the melody goes, in my opinion it's an extremely enjoyable melody that I could listen to again many times. I really like this song, my rating would be 9.5 stars but I had to round up to ten. All in all, well done. I love the lyrics, by the way.
i know they's a tellin me
I'll try to edit it later so that I can update this song
and yay for my first 10
Well
First, this deserves a 3.
Good:
The melody is okay.
Bad:
The melody repeats all over, and the voice acting is not good.
Other:
Keep practicing! =]
Helth
i can live with that
well
its pretty good, BUt its really quiet, which kinda makes it crappy.
you need more power, equing and such
unless you just had the volume knob down, why is it so quiet?
if its cause you dont like your voice that much, use Gsnap, pitch autocorrector
if its simply due to mixing, EQ the piano down at 5kHz, and your voice up at 5 and 20 kHz
also, is that mulitple recordings of your voice? you should pan em out a bit, like one leftish, one rightish, and one mid
and if its your programs, use Audacity, its free, easy, and really useful ,i love it for recording,
I'm in a dilemma cuz I wanted it to sound kinda muffled , but also not too muffled , but I didn't want it just out there like on top of everything ...........well I'll edit this one later see what you think
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
LuciousClump 
