Barbarian rap?

I can see Arnold as Conan rapping to this. If you find someone that can do savage barbarian lyrics to this I will love you for it.

wow

well, the mixing is abesolue shit, but there is some serious potential.. well, it also gets boring really fast, you need more diversity more often, this song shoulda been about 1:40-2:00 in length
mainly, you gotta mix your instruments, sounds like many things are samples, and that limits your mixability, if you were to use instruemnts, you could get more outta your song, but i do really like the riffs, and if this were done better, well, would have to be by quite a bit, i would probably use it.

sadly, i know very little about this type of music so i cant really give you too much advice, um, you need more stuff filling the high end of the frequencies, and your kick has that heird high hum at the end, like people, it kinda isnt good, compress the shit outta that sample