hmm lets see
Wow i have to say that that is pretty clever! in fact don't change it or at least its concept just make it better. It starts off happy then slows then bring it back to the fast speed and make it extra intense sounding. Add transitions like clashing or whatever you feel transitions always add to song quality. Anyways im interested in what you do to this so keep me posted and if you need any suggestions pm me.
10/10 5/5- The drive for music must prevail!
chara89 
