ok but

if you made the beat its decent man as far as the song i cant knock you your speaking of your friend but it sounds like you are reading it on the page and not in the mic kinda what i do when i listen to a beat and come up with my ideas, try not to jam so much in on the beat and memorize it so you can spit it in the mic and it will come out alot better

hahaha.

I know a few old ladies that could burn your cheap ass,
that was just bad.

- HaXoR

you rap like you afraid to.

speak up, or shut up