Ergh.
Some of your other stuff is pretty cool man, but you hit a low on this one, I found it pretty bad to be honest, I really didn't like the vocals at all and it really just was pretty awful to be honest and repetitive.
Sorry, I'm sure you will have way better sucess in the future (= we all hit a sour note sometimes!
3/5, 6/10
!Happy Music Making ~Squll