Looking for some bass
This is a pretty decent start. I felt like I was left wanting more, especially in the bass department. Depending on the software you are using, check your sound directories for a House bass or Sub-kick type of sound to really add some *oomph* to your music :D.
Its a good start but there's a lot of room to add some really amazing stuff. I look forward to listening to some more developed stuff from ya :)