I'm a little lost as to where I'm taking this one.
It's a bit busy sounding at times. I'm looking for some good insight this time and I'd be grateful for any comment!
Thanks - Phil
Insight
Alright, here goes.
The introduction I think could be longer, you firmly establish a soundscape which you then kinda throw away when the beat drops in. Maybe you could have a more simple beat subtly kick in, going down the road of the melody of the intro, and have that move into the bit that comes after 01:10.
Listening on, perhaps you could even have it continue with everything after 01:57.
This has great potential, all the bits are here, they just need to be put together.
Thanks man, I think i know what you mean with the sudden change after a good start. Hmm a more coherent progression could point it in a good direction. Thanks for the advice!
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