Well...

It's average, but I think it's very unappropriate to compare yourself to Paragon... Plus, it hurts your score REAL bad when people come here, check out the song and find out it hasn't got anything to do with Paragon. True, it was DnBish, but the sounds were totally unequally mixed, the fluty noise was somewhat annoying... I guess this would have received a somewhat good score, if you weren't being arrogant by calling this "Paragon-ish loop" ... You're not quite good enough to compare yourself to the master of the Audio Portal (yet?). You sure as hell have potential (and I can say that as an Audio Portal veteran, hehe ;) ), but let this be a lesson :)

Greetz,
DJ Runaway

Ps. Succes on your future projects man :D!