Sounds like fruit
1 minutes about the right length of time for a song like this if it was used.
Wish it didn't repeat so much at the end, could've gone somewhere after that.
I strongly agree with Garnish7. It would best be played as backround music, maybe for a certain character. Perhaps a six year old, yeah... have it as Ness's theme
It's weird to think something can sound like fruit
I am reminded of the neverending story by those chords :) it has great potential liek the others but then seems to kind of lose direction.. mill about aimlessly, and then end :)
you are good at creating calming beautiful starts though - learn to follow through and really do them justice :)
Hmm... I know what you mean. I have a piano version of this song that's much better, but I haven't been able to record it yet.
It sounds pretty nice. I think it would go well with the opening credits to a cartoon series or something. It's good for background music.
Ok, I see what you mean. When I first made it, it was supposed to be for the introduction to my cartoon series, but I don't think that's gonna be the case anymore.
To be honest, I really don't know if I like it or not....
Oh... How come? Any ideas that could help me improve? What didn't you like about it?
Interesting for a seven year old song converted from MIDI style. Because of the rhythm and the over all feel of this song, I would have to say that it belongs in a game best suited for little kids. It is a very happy little song all in its own right.
Ways to improve: The song is a little sharp. Some of the tunes come out a little pitchy. Try dulling it down however possible, as ebbing the sharpness will make the song easier to listen too, and give it a less manufactured feel.
Keep up the work!,
Thanks for the advice! I'll keep it all in mind.
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