Kinda scary
Sorry, I'm a more conservative music writer, I don't exactly like crzy stuff like this, but I'm not gonna rate down just because I don't like a genre. Still not bad. Just a little too random-sounding for me :)
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okay people of newgrounds this is my new full sumbmission. please just dont vote 0 because it says it has a 5 so you assume i put it their listen to the song and vote on ur own opinion not o this guy votes on his own submissions and gives them fives.
This is my most favorite submission so i hope you enjoy im not entirly sure that its trance tell me what genre you think it should be please leave constructive critism not just "yo dog dis suks" give me a reason for why it suks so i can do better.
14etan responds:
finally someone who rates on quality not opinion. thanks for the eight, um... yeah i wish i had FL studio yay mac computer, as for the randomness i was bord and started making a ton of loops and... um...
yo dog dis suks
^ Hehe.
It's a bit out of tune, not really that great, but I like the choices of the 'fects.
The melody isn't that great, it's just like mash up, a mix of this and that.
I think you need part some tunes, a main melody, some alternative melody etc.
Give in your main melody in the middle, before that, add in some build ups or some uplift intro into it.
A fitting background is also suitable, but then again...
Well keep up the good job and I'lll know you do better...
Im in a hurry, gotta go dinner :)
14etan responds:
hurry eat eat eat. any way the intro idea good im workig on another song right now. (if i were motivated enough i coud turn out a song every 2 days) nice slow intro although im using garage band so volume effects dont exist yay. As for the rest of what you said i mostly went overr my head i have had no music schooling, but i got the basic geist of what you said. and thas it
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