my take...

this was definitely a good piece for a beginner. if you want we can catch up on msn and ill help you out with some beats. oh btw im a jumper so ill download this and use it :D
Very good for a beginner, loved the techno scrmble around 1:45.
8/10
4/5
~ JumpstylezBeatz
you should check out some of my beatz. id like your thoughts.

Good, but not the best

I don't know how to jump, but if I did, I'd be jumping. It's good for jumpstyle, but not amazing.

8/10
4/5
3.40 / 5.00 (+ 0.070)

Nice

It's nice.

nice!

i loved it til :32
once that detuned synth came in, i didn't think it fit well....
at 1:40-what an interesting break for jumpstyle music! loved that!