An amazing song overall but i did notice something, there were two transitions in the song one at 1:00 and another at about 2:30. The one at 1:00 (lol) was Slightly dramatic and quick for a slow part but i think it was probably the best way to go, so it helped it actually! The one at 2:30 (2:37 to be exact) was the only "flaw" it changed the tempo at the climax of the song so it kinda really killed the buzz from what i believe is the main Chorus. Overall i believe you nailed everything else an i gave you 5/5 because it is a really nice song.
Author Comments
I haven't really submitted anything for a while, and this is something I have been working on and off for about 3 weeks after my latest piece. I hope you all enjoy this! I've noticed that Most of my songs have been getting attention lol, so I hope you guys like this one also. As always, rate fairly, and please review!
note: if it sounds bland or anything It's because I haven't added any effects. If this song becomes popular like Cobalt, and Into Light, I will do that for all of you :P.
Good but...
The transition (is that the right word? =D) at 1:00 or something is to fast.. You should fade out a little bit longer I think. It's good anyway, bit fast, but I like it =D
well done
I like the song without any effects. I also like that fact that it was fast paced and had a lot of rythem to it.this really a great song in all. i even downloaded it
Envisage123 responds:
Thank you! I appreciate it!
Another good track by you
You really do have a good ear for drum beats. The sounds in the first part worked well with the percieved anger of the song, and I liked the change halfway thourgh. HOWEVER I didnt like the bit at about 2:40, it didn't sound good to me.
Envisage123 responds:
Yea, to tell you the truth, i don't quite like it either after listening to that part. This song was just a little something I came up with lol, and doesn't quite fit my other pieces which I think are better then this song. Anyway, thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed most of my song :P.
wow
you are really good. i have downloaded all your songs, and i can't wait to see if there's more coming. 10/10 5/5
Envisage123 responds:
Thank you! I do have something that I will be making soon, so expect something in a couple of weeks :P maybe less.
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