Didn't like it, it's just very repetitive to me, sorry
I think this is not the right genre of sound for this tye of song sorry :/
I agree with Phantom, good instrumental work.. other then that.. I don't hear the song at all. It does have the techno feel, but as for a remix... No.
The same 7-second loop over and over and OVER?! This just drills a hole in my head. It's annoying, to be quite honest. Maybe some kind of gentler bassline would have made it less painful to listen to. And maybe introducing a new phrase before half the song is over.
That is really all there is to say about it.
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