Needs more bass

That's one of my only complaint. There's just way too much treble. Nice guitar work though. You do a nice scream/growl thing, as a bonus.

As for having a shitty microphone, it's better than mine! =)

Another Punk

The beginning transition to the song sounds good. But the hats and cymbal crashes kinda sound wack in the beginning as if off beat. The vocals need to have more depth and have to be a little more louder than the music.

Also, the second time the vocals came in, it was the exact opposite with the sounds of both.

The title says it all..

But it's well sung sometimes. Other parts make me cringe. The scream should really be from the chest, not the throat, and really I fail to hear any real emotion coming from these vocals. The guitar riff... nothing original, nor mind blowing, but it's played. I'm taking this away now

dood

professional, really professional, man. and the "sheid" is actually a pop screen.

wow^^

thats fuc*in great xD
go on^^