Thanks mad man.I like it. i think the synth is a bit too high though. Either that or the fast "Beep beep bep beep" isnt strong enough.
Author Comments
Yet another demo. I'll have a complete song done eventually, but for now I want you guys to tell me what you think of this.
This is my attempt at a Muse-ish / off-beat song. I'm a bit stuck on it at the moment. Any criticisms and suggestions will be most helpful.
Needs Work
Moving line is very nice.
When the melody comes in, its a bit square. I'd like to hear some variation.
You seem to have a build up to nothing. There is nothing I'm looking forward to. I'm not sure what you meant by "off-beat," but, I like the creativity included in the percussion (bass drum) in reference to its time placements.
Some ways to fix this:
Rewrite your melody to change pitchs more often then every 2 "counts."
Use a chord progression to essentially "lead" the listener somewhere.
KumoKan responds:
Perfect. This demo was intended to be listened by people like you. Thank you.
-KK-
Credits & Info
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- Waiting for 3 more votes
- Uploaded
- Jan 18, 2009
- 10:24 PM EST
- Genre
- Miscellaneous
- File Info
- Song
- 1.4 MB
- 1 min 13 sec
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