Wait for it...
The beginning part of this song is kinda boring, but it's worth the wait to hear the rest of the song. I like the instrument that comes in half way through the song. The songs a little slow to start, but that's just my preference. The melody you've chosen works well with the song, and even better with that instrument, I feel. Sounds like a song that'd be playing at an interstellar transit station or something.
some parts sounded like something that would be in spore
i cant think of anything bad about it except that half the song was the same melody (except with some different effects) and then finally something different happens at 1:15 where it stays the same too. good job on making a catchy, but a bit repetitive song.
I could see you going a bit further with the melody in this. I think you really could make this concept shine with a lil more work melodicly. Its not a bad song what so ever however. Keep it up for sure!
thanks for the review my friend. I will keep that in mind. I just have trouble with this stuff, and like... i can't do something past a certain point
if you understand what i mean feel free to help me lol.
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