ay diz shit bumpin
ay diz shit fye get on ma page n listen 2 ma muzik cuz i wanna rock yo beats n if u lyk ma muzik let me kno if i can rock yo beats
repetitive, "thug rap crap" written all over it
the high pitch repetitive sound ruined it. Too simple and also just to repetitive in general. Typical "thug" sounding rap crap, in otherword this is nothing original. Maybe you could try to expand your musical tastes to include stuff that has some originality. It might help if you went for something longer than 2:07 as well.
First off thanks a lot for your comment on my beat saying all tha things that were rong in this beat it would have been better if your critisim was usefull but it wasnt... so on this not im going to go to you music page and listen to you stuff to see if you kno wat your tawking about
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.