Very Nice
Kerrie has a nice voice
* EDIT (January 10th): Added piano, and a clip of Kerrie, she'll be singing more later, but she's sickz right now. :[ Get better Kerrie!!! *
* EDIT (January 13th): It's almost done!!! Kerrie sang some more verses, I think they sound awesome! :3 Added some more effects/pads, and mastered it a bit more.
* EDIT (January 20th): Remastered it, made Kerrie's voice stronger. It sounds more full now.
First song/work in progress for the new year!
This is going to be an original collab with me and zomgkerrie, she'll be singing original lyrics.
Here's zomgkerrie's page: http://zomgkerrie.newgrou nds.com/
Hope you all enjoy this, I certainly did!
The finished product should be up in a week or so.
Enjoy and leave comments/review! :D
Very Nice
Kerrie has a nice voice
Like always
This is some good shit, as always. How you manage to make all these tracks non-stop is beyond me.
Only a 9/10 you say? Well, I think the treble is a little high on vocals and hats(may be the mastering I don't know), Kerrie's voice and the hats is so sharp they sound a little distorted. Other then that, it's a superb track.
Come another day.
Well here's a nice long review. :P
0:24 sounds a little out of place. I think it's because of how that filter/EQ/whatever jumps in so suddenly. A little too sudden.
Kerrie's voice is nice, but I think it could use a little more projecting? I'm sure an EQ can help with that. I think right now it sounds a little cut off in the higher frequencies.
The piano is nice, but I think it could definitely be made to stand out a little more in the song.
I think the mix between instruments and vocals needs a little different balance. For some reason your mixing here seems to emphasize a lot more on the synths, and it really doesn't do justice to her voice.
As far as song structure goes, the first half-ish of the song gets a little repetitive. It starts getting a lot better afterwards.
Keep at it! :D
-HFX ^_^
Hehehe... funny story.
So I has just thought out some great feedback, and was just thinking how to word it when my brother called my name and broke my trance. Anyway great song I love the basic not too complex feel to it that places it perfectly in the trance genre.
My only concern is the vocals being too loud or repetitive. Normally I am completely anal about this, but recently I come to realize this is where people come to learn and improve rather then post already perfected music. So I say to hell with it! Only way to incorporate good vocals into your music is trail and error.
With this version I think I heard those vocals too much, new clips will be great as long and you replace some of the current vocals with the new stuff. I wouldn't keep adding. The voice/sound ratio is good as it is, the vocals just need to be a tad less repetitive.
Otherwise great song: 10/10 music, 8/10 vocals, 10/10 on picking someone with a good voice. I'll rate ya a 5 for this.
Hope my review helps.
wow you are consistent
You make a new song almost every other day and most people who do that make shitty songs but you my friend, ALL of your songs you submit have a very nice touch of professionalism. All of your songs are awesome quality. Only complaint in this one is that its not finished! I loved the club kicked you used around 3:33 and then the melody after that. I was wondering if one day i could recieve a review and some insight from you =P. I can't wait to see you get a record label in the future! Good luck with all your WIP and any song that you make because maybe one day one of them will get really famous!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.