Really short

This was very short I think you can do alot with it expanding on this would be nice just have to have some extra sounds and adding some changes even some build up of the tunes would be a plus these are just some small things that could be improved and make it better as a whole just a small idea of improvment but hope to hear more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There's a few suggestions above

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Pretty good...

Its alright. Nothing's really that bad.

Haha

Nice, it's a pretty monotone tune but it is a bit addictive, can let it loop without getting tired despite the same sound all the way. Nice and clear sound quality too, no flaws, keep it going!

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Tempo was slightly off and notes didn't quite fit right together it felt at points. Keep working at it and I'm sure it'll come together :) pretty cool so far though.