Again, beautiful. Perfect

Inspiring

This is a really decent sounding song. Reminds me of the Sim City 4 soundtrack, and that is definitely an achievement.

The drums and the guitar could have perhaps been a bit more acoustic, organic. However, that is an infinitesimal note when taking into account that this is your first submission.

Truly a great job!

real great

you play some instrument in this? really nice song keep it up

Wow, this is really good!

There's not much to say, nothing wrong with it that i can point out.
the vocals were alright, the bass is awesome in this song though. the guitar harmonics were nice too.
Did you play the guitar for this?