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well barly met my standerds till 1:00 i kicked in.

I agree

little repetitive but still works, the other song was better of the 2. It doesn't seem like you messed with the setting to much on the sounds. like, they seem plain and ordanary.

Just a little bit to repetitive

Yeah, you i personally think that sometimes you looped the same theme/melody just one too many times. This gave it a repetitive feel that it shouldn't have. Just need to cut out one loop of each variation. then i will be happy. Also the ending kindof was well... a little lame. Myabe it is just me, but maybe this song would of been better if it faded into nothing but thats just me.