this is the second demo of this song. this is an original idea, thus far created entirely by me. I even wrote and sang the vocals!
it will soon be a collaboration project though. me and another NG member (can't remember his NG username), are going to finish it up.
enjoy and review!
wow!
maby i'm lucky but i heard every word on the first go. To me the vocals are fine. But suffice to say i'm no where near an expert. I only want to congratulate u on a very well done demo thank you and thank you again! 10/10 from me but what do i no. i like what i like.
sweet
It was not the best just because it did not build enough. so for on the full version you should have it build up more and speed up.
that wasn't singing
with all sincerity, I'd get microsoft sam to sing better than this
more than 1/3 of the song was this ridiculous heavily-modified voice that resembles anything but a voice
just start the song from :27, it's actually interesting, has a nice tune and potential for extension.
-2 for voice
-1 for lack of breaks + buildup + climax
-1 for lack of compression on channel responsible for the fade-in around :40
it was good otherwise
3 and 6
you know what you are doing, so do it.
lol I was going for a "raver's fantasy" type of aproach. I'll see what I can do to make the voice seem more "alive"
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
DJ-Tonic 
