-A song that doesn't know what it is yet-
This one took me about five days.
It changes tone throughout the middle of the song (hence the title)
Appreciated if you comment and rate!
Pretty good
from about 50-130 you had me waiting for it to pick up a little and the switch right after that kinda threw me. it seemed like you were building up to something bigger but never got there... you were on track though! not a big fan of the piano, i'd hop up the synth and drums a bit more (maybe even the tempo) and see where that takes you. Please dont ignore this song, you've got a gem in there, i hope you find it and show us what you really meant to do.
Thanx 4 the review.
and for the advice you gave me some encouragement to clean up this song a little bit.
Good try
okay it started out nice, and then somewhere around 0:50 it didnt work so well for me anymore, but it was still ok. but around 1:50 it was just messed up (to me), the beats didnt flow anymore. i hope u can do something with this info. GL
Thanks man
I was hopin someone could give me some tough criticism so I can see what to work on.
DEFINTELY!!!
Better than you other two submissions. Keep it up like this. I'll definitely see you in my favorite artist.
Begining was great
The begining had to be the best part of the song but when it changed,
the gap was a little too long
I didn't like the second part as much but it was still okay
Can't wait to see your later releases!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
B1ackStar92 
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