Needs work...

....some really nice elements in this tune, which is verging on the experimental/AphexTwin style of Hip-Hop, with those strange voices and stop-starts. The sounds used are nice and retro-lo-fi, but they really don't sound cool enough! I know that's an annoying thing to say, but for this type of tune u have to make it sound cooler and weirder than anything else that has passed before. Have a listen to some Prefuse73 stuff, as I think it will add direction to your tunes. I think it's great, and nice and experimental, it's just that i have heard so many things that are more comprehensive than this tune. It's good, but fuck with it more!