holy shit
dude the beggining is awesome :o
and the song omg >.<
beyond awesome
Author Comments
My friend Karl and myself worked on this for a while. I then did a lot of extra work on it the next day. I hope you all enjoy it and go ahead and tell me what you think if you wish.
fizzypop2 responds:
Thanks. Had some help from muh buddy Karl with this one. (he's doing guitar along with me in the new band -Snapneck-) We'll have some new songs up once we get recording. Hope you'll get the chance to check it out.
STUFF!
I actually really liked the beginning man.
I don't see why people didn't like it. I 100% agree about the drums though. They are extremely creative.
I liked the ending too... so. Yeah. Nothing to complain about this really.
Good job with it.
fizzypop2 responds:
Well thanks. Haven't gotten any comments on this in a long while. I appreciate it.
Have to agree with the person below me...
The ending needs some serious work. The last thing you want is a dull beginning. Honestly, it doesn't really feel like anything is really happening until thirty seconds.
The drumbeat was pretty different after :30. That's one of the things that held my attention in this song. The drumbeat was really creative.
But one thing I did not like was the repetitive sequence of the piano. Not so much the melody, but the fact that it kept hitting that D note constantly.
Furthermore, the guitar doesn't really blend in with the piano well. The guitar is an extremely high-energy instrument, as I see it, while the piano is a very stark contrast to the energy conveyed by the guitar, and vice versa.
And to talk about the guitar further, the entrance of the guitar and it's chord isn't really paved well, even though the drumbeat and the piano melody both enhanced prior to the guitar's entry.
Overall, 7|10 seems right.
fizzypop2 responds:
Thanks for the review man. I also noticed that annoyingly repetitive note and it bugged me for a while. A 7 is good enough for me coming from someone who has a ton of great music like yourself. My band is getting some work done on a decent song so maybe we'll cheaply (due to the cost of a decent microphone and equipment to go with it) record it in a few weeks when we get it worked out and smoothed down.
ok song
The beginning needs work but ok keep trying 4/5
fizzypop2 responds:
Okay thanks. :)
Credits & Info
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- Uploaded
- Dec 13, 2008
- 7:33 PM EST
- Genre
- General Rock
- File Info
- Song
- 5.1 MB
- 2 min 15 sec
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