nott badd =]

the snare/ cymbol/ clap or whatever you use thats the second sound to come in is too loud.

otherthen that, nice work =]

and instead of doing the bass beat that comes in at 0:28, try making that same thing, but with a synthie sound, and same with the one at 0:43, then this could be somewhat of a drum and bass song.

pretty cool though, a style i havent really heard but well done =]

keep it up

-AriA

if you have time, come take a look at my stuff =]

9/10 5/5

PS: i LOVE the part at 1:32 ish or whatever, thats sweet. would be better with a synthie melody.