Hmm
Sounds pretty basic. But hey, whatever...
Let me give it a quick listen, then I'll relisten to it for you review.
I like that bass at the intro, but I don't like the celestial that you used, because it sounds like a straight up preset. You should toy around with the X and Y thingy, of course this is just assuming that you're using FL... Maybe I'm wrong?
I don't like the part at :30. It just... It jumps so suddenly without warning or any transition what so ever.
It's just... you have a good start, but that's all it is. A start. You need some build in here and maybe some better beat sounds, because it doesn't sound like you have much of a beat in the song. The beat is the spine, brah.
Keep it coming though. You'll get better.
Hit me back, if you want.
Bomber109 
