Not much to say
As far as criticism goes, it sounds like game over music to me. I guess the fact it doesn't really resolve at the end just makes it sound more tragic, like the journey ended when it wasn't supposed to.
What the player will hear on the game over screen of the game. If you don't like it, please tell me how I can make it better.
Quality of the instruments isn't important. The file he is going to use will be a MIDI anyways.
Not much to say
As far as criticism goes, it sounds like game over music to me. I guess the fact it doesn't really resolve at the end just makes it sound more tragic, like the journey ended when it wasn't supposed to.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.