Well, this again, took me a certain amounts of hours (about 3)
This is just a demo, and when I finish it (If I do) it'll be a song and not a loop.
I think that it sounds good, but because I usually listen to it whilst adding bits to it (as I'm sure most others do) it gets kinda repetitive - Maybe some fresh listeners will find it appealing.
I would REALLY appreciate it if you could be me some ideas on what to add, or how to improve on it - it would be invaluable! (Or even just a review will make me happy :D)
I hope you guys enjoy it.
P.S What do you think category does this belong in, or is techno fine? :/
PPS I recommened listening with the sound up :D
Good start.
I can definitely tell it's only a demo for the song. Not bad of a start. I think the pacing is a little bit slow... and it seems that every verse it has a 1 second stop. Then it adds another rhythm into it. Not sure if you know what I mean, or if it was meant to be that way... but it kind of distorts the rhythm itself for the song. Nice job all around though. Keep it going and more practicing!
Yeah, i put it in weird timing - because it just sounded better that way (the orginal melody did anyway). And then I couldn't put anything else to it with relative ease. On my newer version i've tried to even out the timings - that's difficult aswell btw :P
As far as the gradual increase in thickness of the music - I can't think of any other way! I'm still very newb :D
But anyway, thanks a lot for your review, and I'm glad I can count on someone to give me positive feedback on most things I make. :D
Good Song
I really liked this song. The only problem I have with it is how short it is, which is fine since it's a demo. Can't wait for the whole thing. And yeah, techno's fine ;)
I really am quite elated that you enjoyed it. I'll try my very best not to disappoint :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Viper251 
Coopanimates 
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