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Trance song made with FL demo. Remember, last part of the song os the best part, so plz hear that before reviewing :) Tell me what you like or dislike, and what i can do to be better :D I know it´s very short, but i still use the demo version, and can´t save my projects for further work. Well enjoy, rate and review :D

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PeckaPrime

2008-12-03 12:57:03

Not bad

I mean, it's good, but get the full FL studio, cuz i don't want you to use "i made it with FL demo so i can't save progress" as an excuse every time. The best part is 0.15 till 0.29 that's GREAT man, then those synts come in and it kinnda messes it up, the part from 0.49 on is kinnda forced in, wthout any real transition, and isn't really that great, than those crowd noises don't really work if you ask me.

Anyway get FL studio, work on the transitions, don't forcibly change the style too much and you'll improve a lot. The begining till 0.29, that's really good, REALLY good man, GREAT melody and base, but you kinnda forced the changes too much. It needs to be more consistent,

Anyway it's not bad, im sure you'll get better.
Keep workin, man. And you'll keep improvin.

CyberPot responds:

Hey Pecka Prime.

Thx for your review. Yeah i still use demo, but it is not an excuse, it´s just to inform people that i use it, and that the song can´t be as good as all the others here on NG. Anyway, i liked the part you are talking about too, but i just thought that it needed to be harder, like a second lead. Yeah i know the change is way too big, but thats how it is :) Have you checked some of my other songs, cuz some of them are a lot better than this one. And yeah i will continue working on my skills, i am especially inspired by Nal1200 and his songs, they rock! :D
About getting FL studio. I don´t think i will buy FL cuz it´s too expensive and i don´t have that big of an interest in music making. But if people start to like these songs i upload here, perhaps i will reconsider it. The Crowd voices are to loud i know, and i´ve heard it before, but i like them, it gives a feeling of a live performance.
Thats all from me. Again Thanks for your review :)

--CyberPot--