Love this tune. But there's one thing.

What's up with the ending.
It sounds like awkward like an exit. Can't tell for sure how it sounded, but it reminded me about the alarm sound at work.
Nevertheless this is an old track. I've still have to look at your other tunes. Could perhaps be that you wished to leave us with a original ending.
Good work.
8/10
4/5

Lovin It! Not the McDonalts type though...

Goood Work here!
I liked the begginging, with the pads, and everytihng just worked :D
Love the ideas in this song the melo's are well developed :D
Epic piece - Congrats!

One word.

Awesomeness.