Flight of Birds

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Flight of Birds

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Author Comments

I'm satisfied with the result, but it never really sounds as good as when I play it live...
Critique please!

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arieltek

2008-11-28 22:07:58

i enjoy it

what angelus is right but u play guitar very good and i enjoy for sure this song. keep working hard xD

GlavinThryash responds:

Thanks! will do!

whitewolf2759

2008-11-28 22:06:03

very enjoyable

I really like this song, but I think you need to work on your pace and note placement abit more.

GlavinThryash responds:

Thank you for the review! Yeah, definately I need to work on the note placement..I kinda just through everything together and hoped for the best ;)

Angelus1818

2008-11-28 21:51:36

not to shabby!

hey there!

There where a few sour notes but I gave you a 4/5. You are really good, I can tell. I like what I hear, for sure. Could use a better build/chorus though. Or atleast some chords in there. I think that would help it, besides the occasional strum you did here and there. Keep it up though ;)

GlavinThryash responds:

Thanks for the advice! It is much appreciated! I know what you mean, the strings I have been using are quite old and at times get a bit difficult to press all the way down creating the fuzzed notes :)