hey!
dude this is really good, this is amazing well put together in every way nothing negatve to say, its great. keep it up :) higher than 10/10!
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This is a song that I've been working on for a while that is somewhat inspired by the new kanye west album. Enjoy!
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takeflight responds:
hey thanks man! good to see you haven't fallen off the edge of the earth! Lookin forward to your future submissions :']
Jeez!
This song is so tight. One of the best R&B i've ever heard haha. loved everything about it. Its like a trancy-rap beat. Has a lot of emotion. One thing i would work on, is the drums you used. try and get some more hip-hop sounding samples.... correct me if i'm wrong, but are these vengeance drums? lol.
to end on a good note, incredible song. too bad the rating is so low :(
Fived : 3.07 / 5.00 (+ 0.30) 10/10 and downloaded. keep up the good work.
takeflight responds:
lol, thanx man, i was definitely trying for a more electronic feel, and i don't know if the drums are vengeance or not (i got them in this random sound pack) but they are dance drums modified to be hip hop kicks. Once again thanx bro for the review! Hit me up when you upload a new song
Damn!
This is sick. I don't think I that I've heard a song as epic ass one in a long time.
I can tell you put a lot of hard work into this one. It's the perfect length, and it never gets repetitive. I actually just want to keep listening to it on loop.
The intro is dope. It sequences perfectly into the tune. The bass that you are using sounds amazing man.
The lead that you chose for the main tune was a good one. It's not to loud, or soft. it's right in between.
At 1:00, I knew this was a great song. You added exactly the tune I wanted to hear.
The drums sounded great, but they could have had a little more variation. I'm not sure tho. haha R&B isn't my strong point.
Great job wit this one man.
5/5, 9/10, Fav'd
~{Michael425}~
takeflight responds:
wow, thanx man, i love to see someone enjoy my work. I'm already working on fixing it, adding a little variation, and trying a different mastering technique.
really good
your mastering is pretty lackluster, but your composition is really good. i dunno how you've got a 1.69 on it so far, but i gave you a 5 and i actually know what i'm talking about. this is some quality shit, especially when compared to the garbage you'll often find on NG.
hit me up on AIM sometime for advice or a collab.
takeflight responds:
yeah mastering isn't exactly my forte, I've been told it's not supposed to be hard, and i try but it never comes out right. As for the score, I was kinda expecting a lower score because of the style, it's something ppl aren't used to so they automaticly reject it, it seems, oh well. Thanks for the review, and I'll take any advice i can get at this point lol.
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