Helpful Hint

Learn how to use the mixer ALOT better
do tht and most of ur music will sound ALOT better, I like ur style, you just need better quality.
Just lookin out

Meh

First off, I wouldn't call this Trance, because the kick is too hard.

And now to the song. The kick distorts the hi-hat and clap and alota stuff. Also, the main melody seems to be everywhere, and uncontrollable. Try to fix that, and not just have a bunch of random notes it seems like. Try breaking it up rather than having a note every second. Also, don't use extreamly recognizable Sytrus presets like Gold Saw and Platinum Saw and stuff like that. Get Nexus my friend. As well, if your going to use a hard kick like that, at least change the bass to fit the melody. This song seems to be everywhere. I'll go listen to your other songs.

{DJ-HLS}

hmmmm

i can say that all you have to do is work on your melodies. find popular songs amongst newgrounds and find why the melody is so attracting to the ear. study it. then experiment with your own style.
second, the percussion was distorted sounding.
i am just trying to let you know what was not so great.
keep on trying and you will, no doubt, become better!
good luck!

good

i agree with the guy below
also the claps could be a bit better
try giving the baseline a good sync with the melody
also try messing around with dif. synth sounds they make big differences
8/5 4/5 same as below =]

I don't know what to say...

The bass line doesn't change a tune, sticks to a single note. Change it so it sticks to the melody, as I said in your last song. Something else I noticed. What's with the kick? Did you set the song on a tempo or just chuck ur kick in every second beat on the sequencer?
It's best to stick to a 4/4 beat, if it doesn't sound right, the problem is your melody.
a 4/4 beat is the best and easiest to work with when it comes to techno.
8/10 4/5

-Cheers Brando