Hi there, first off, I'm very sorry it's taken me THIS long to respond, I didn't use this site properly as much as I intend to now so I never knew about ya comment, I wanna respond to everyone who commented before. Thanks very much ya criticism, I'm glad you like the melodies but sorry if the other things didn't quite impress you much. I'm planning a comeback and I hope to improve and then may add more depth to my future songs.