THIS IS SUCH SHIT. My little brother walked in during this song and shat his pants and died. FUCK YOU MAN
Seems like it could be good with a little work. Between 34 sec to 1:25 you'll start to hear your drum loop pump and breath which is a sure sign that your mix is out of wack. You sould probably balance your levels and start your mix from scratch.
Just some advice and not meant to be overly critical. Otherwise I think your track shows alot of promise. Keep at it.
Okay for an early song
This wasn't really an ambient song; more like trance or techno. I didn't like the drums at the beginning since they take such little time to loop and get old fast. The melody was pretty good but it was also short and got old fast, and it didn't really build up to anything. Overall, It wasn't very good, but most of the flaws could be fixed with some work.