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This is something I just started on and thought sounded cool. It is, obviously far from finished. I plan on leading into a faster paced part later in the song. If you have any ideas, do tell. Lemme know what you think.


Sounds cool.

It doesn't go anywhere though. :/

Pianos don't sustain like that in real life..so it sounds really weird.

That sound that came in at 0:55 gets rather annoying, it's quite repetitive, and it's just the right frequency that it rings the ears.

The subtle beat that comes in at 1:22 was cool, took a little while to get here though.

WORK ON IT PLEASE, I really like the lead you use in the intro, just work on the attack of the notes because they're clicky.

Keep it up, you have loads of potential!


GibbiusMaximus responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
Yeah, this is just the idea so far, it will go somewhere
And i know what u mean about the piano, ill try switching the sample.
Yeah, I realize that now, I can probably switch the pattern up to give it variety.
I am currently working on it, between all the other crap ive got to do ;P
But thanks again for all of the advice.
Most people pop on here, give it a shit vote and run without saying a word. The criticism you provided was exactly what I was looking for! Thanks a million!

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Credits & Info

3.80 / 5.00

Nov 6, 2008
6:56 PM EST
File Info
1.5 MB
1 min 52 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.