A Silent Piece...A Monsterous Piece...A Bit Much?

I can picture this in a commercial for background music (the beginning at least). I would have brought in a lighter sounding lead around 2 min, the guitar was a little overpowering. Everything sounds like it would sound very good live but the recording and quality of this song is rather low. Some parts of this song I found to be awkward and distracting and some parts I found peaceful and soothing while some parts were just poorly recorded and mastered. I was thrown all over the place with this submission, and this is definitely a piece you have to be ready to listen to because some of the changes are rather abrupt. try introducing instruments slower so you can give time for your listener to adjust. Most is not all of the piano progressions were nice and this constant factor give me an "anchor'' so to speak through out the song. As the song was introduced it felt as if it was going to have a feel similar to that of The Pixies which some parts did. Overall though I feel that this is a good song and like I said before if I were to hear this live with quality sounds and instruments I am sure that I would enjoy it very much. Nice submission and I know that you are going to keep getting better so just keep on doing what you like do do and maybe take into account some of the things that I have said here and improve. By the way the intro was my favorite part, if you could take out the white noise in the background I would have really really liked it. Good job though and I hope to hear more from you.

5/5
Marks-a-lot